This presentation is part of the Grammar for Writing programme, where Year 7 students from the London Nautical School are developing their own opening to a piece of Dystopian fiction. This, eighth, presentation is what the teacher, Mr Christopher Waugh, delivered to the researchers after the completion of the project. For further information, samples of the students’ work and the associated lesson plans, check the site http://chris.edutronic.net/professional-journal/learning-resources/grammar-for-writing-dystopian-openings-outline/